The Comic Spirit
Project I
Peer Assessment
Your Name: _______________________________________________
Rate the four scenes in each category on a scale of (-)1 to 5 (+):
CATEGORY |
THE AFFAIR |
THE MARRIAGE |
THE NEIGHBOR |
PSEUDONIPIO |
CHARACTERS |
4.1 | 4.0 | 3.5 | 4.4 |
PLOT |
3.8 | 4.1 | 2.8 | 4.5 |
DIALOGUE |
3.8 | 4.3 | 2.6 | 4.0 |
Comment below on the Strengths and Weakness of each:
The Affair Strengths: dialogue (7), ending (2), thought, construction, character, plot (2), like ancient plays, comic confusion, the last line, comic Weaknesses: ending (4), characters, more dialogue, confusing dialogue (2), more chaos, not funny (2), middle wasn't funny--drawn out |
The Marriage Strengths: dialogue (6), plot (4), comical (3), original, ending, rhyme, nice scenes, opening line, stage directions (2) Weaknesses: ending abrupt (3), rushed dialogue, confusing, scene didn't reflect prologue |
The Neighbor Strengths: characters (3), plot (2), dialogue (2), idea Weaknesses: dialogue (5), introduction (2), confusing (4), ending, comedy (2), construction, characters, too short (4), needs stage directions, underdeveloped |
Pseudonipio: Strengths: different, original/creative (2), characters (2), plot (4), dialogue (3), construction, title, very comic (3), stage directions, detailed (4), prologue (2), concept Weaknesses: dialogue (2), comedy (2), long introduction, like all the other plays we read, sources missing |
Name your 1st choice and explain: PSEUDONIPIO
(The Affair had the next highest rating for first place)
Name your 2nd Choice and explain: PSEUDONIPIO
(The Marriage had the next highest rating for second place)